final review

1. Timeliness- Having to work quick on a project or article before it is not relevant anymore.

2. Proximity- deadline 

3. Human Interest- A group of people that would enjoy/relate to your story.

4. Prominence- state of being important 

5. Conflict- A problem 

6. Interviews- To ask someone questions for an interview story

7. Research- Looked up information 

8. Quotations- Use of quotes in a story

9. Yes-no question- Question that can only be answered with yes or no, without further information

10. follow-up question- reply questions 

11. Objective writing- intent upon or dealing with things external to the mind rather than with thoughts or feelings, as a person or a book.

12. Transition paragraph- Paragraph that introduces a quote 

13. Hard news story- A deep story that has meaning

14. Soft news story- Less important story /light hearted 

15. Inverted Pyramid-  a visual information should be prioritized and structured in a text that journalists uses.

16. Third-person point of view- writing about someone else 

17. 5 Ws and H lead- Who, what. when, where, why. and how 

18. editing- Correcting and going back on your writing piece 

19. attribution- Giving credit to someone 

20. paraphrase- to shorten 

21. fragmentary quotation- uncompleted quote 

22. direct quotation- exact words of someone else in your writing 

23. partial quotation- incomplete quote

24. Uses of quotations - Someone else said something that you put in your story 

25. When to use quotations- when someone else said it

26. When quotations are unnecessary or not desired- When you use quote as a fact 

27. Editorial- writing that people have their opinion in 

28. editorial page- a page that people submit their opinions 

29. columns- the form an article is written in 

30. editorial that criticizes- article that criticizes a person, place or product

31. editorial that explains- article that explains something 

32. editorial that persuades- article that persuades a product
33. letter to the editor- letter to the editor or publication 

CE #3.3

1. How many percent increase of his salary paid as a bonus COULD have Mark Houser gotten according to his contract? Page A1 "Oil land overseer Houser lands..."
it could have risen 62%
2. What NON-TEXTUAL clues are evident in the political cartoon on page A7 help the viewer to understand the artists perspective? List 4
-the cartoon man's facial expression 
-his t-shirt
-the button on his suspenders
-the way he's gripping the iPad (the way his pinky is curled looks like it resembles frustration)
3. What is the so-called 'Merry Christmas Law." Page B1 "'Peanuts display sparks outcry"
the "Merry Christmas Law' is the rule of not putting quotes,pictures,etc.. that could offend a religion or culture
4. Why is Whole Foods being removed from the Nasdaq-100 index? Page B5 "Whole Foods to leave key stock index"
whole foods is being removed do to their cap decline from 22billion to 9.9 billion in the last three years, they're unable to keep up with the competition within nasdaq.
5. What is so special about Harry Potter yoga? Page D1 "Potions and Poses"
Like no other yoga class this Harry Potter Yoga includes cloaks,wands,and potions all within the yoga

LONG RESPONSE:

Recently The Texas Department of Public safety wanted APD to investigate their labs.Four of the workers at the lab were asked to leave work with the sate.The Workers that manipulated with the confidential work that goes on in the lab have drawn the Austin's local center to close. Disobeying the rules within the lab caused many salty results and testing.The Austin lab is in the works of closing for misuse of information ,and the little number of a trust worthy staff.The community will 100% be effected by the closing of the lab ,because now tests and labs won't be completed as fast as before.Austin Police should stay out of the labs because it will cause more problems to rise from the already large issue.The state of Texas should more closely control the lab due to its important role in the community.

Peer Critique

1. Who were the sources?
Karen Garcia, Samuel Garcia, and Lalo. 

2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Karen Garcia and Samuel Garcia were on their way home when the stopped to help a car that was pulled over. A woman who was mental then jumped in their car and started yelling at them.

3. How many paragraphs is the story?
15

4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
825

5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
14

6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3

7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
“Before I could even process what happened, she was climbing onto the center consul trying to grab my keys,” Karen said

8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
in the Middle

9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes

10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
The woman who got into the car

11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
Yes

12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
No

13. Write a headline to go with this story:p
psychotic Lady Invades Personal Boundaries 
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
i think this story was vary interesting and well written

15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
100

self critique

1. Who were the sources?
Frank, Sylvia, and Jana Bhuiyan
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
My dad Frank Bhuiyan's journey to america from bangladesh.How this move impacted his life and his life though out.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
23
4. How many words is the story?
809
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
8
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
2
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?“When i met my girlfriend now wife Sylvia is when i realised i would never move back to Bangladesh,”
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
middle
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
yes
10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
my dad's mom
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
 yes 
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
yes
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
'A monumental Move'
14. Sum up the opinion of the story:
it's a bit messy
15. Give yourself a self grade from 0-100
90

CE 3.2

1. Who are three of the Trump cabinet choices that critics say are unqualified to be in those positions, according to the article on page A1 "Carson chosen to lead HUD"
Steve Mnuchin, General James Mattis, Nikki Haley
2. How, specifically, have county jails in Texas reduced the number of suicides over the past year? Page B1 "Jail suicides drop..."procedures require jail intake officers to alert a supervisor, judge or a mental health professional any time newly arrived prisoners indicate they had considered killing or hurting themselves recently, had ever attempted suicide, are feeling hopeless or have nothing to look forward to,more in depth caring caring of the inmates is required.
3. What kind of business is Perk Inc.? Page B5 "Calif. firm buys..."
a business that makes mobile reward software 
4. Who are the five Heisman candidates and what school do they attend? Page C1 "Heisman Hopefuls"
Lamar Jackson-Louisville Cardinals, Jabrill Peppers-Michigan, Deshaun Watson-Clemson,Baker mayfield-OU ,Dede Westbrook-OU
5. What are two things you could do in Pt. Reyes, CA? Page SA2 "Flee San Francisco"
i would do the art work shop and wood block print holiday cards

LONG RESPONSE :

In Colorado city,Texas Iraan football team took a victorious win at they football game letting them advance to the semi final game.Though things were all extremely joyful for the high school after the big win ,it did not last long. Unfortunately,Iraan high schools cheer team was in tragic bus accident on the way home from the game. yes i enjoyed this piece because the first thing you see the you look at the piece is the positive victory of the high school.But before you know it the tragedy of the cheerleaders is stated and the story from there was grim.
The writers in this story really elaborated on the car accident allowing me to really understand what happened in and after the crash.The writers gave a public service announcement at eh beginning of the piece,something that is never done in a feature story,and was allowed because of the circumstances of the occurrence.