final review

1. Timeliness- Having to work quick on a project or article before it is not relevant anymore.

2. Proximity- deadline 

3. Human Interest- A group of people that would enjoy/relate to your story.

4. Prominence- state of being important 

5. Conflict- A problem 

6. Interviews- To ask someone questions for an interview story

7. Research- Looked up information 

8. Quotations- Use of quotes in a story

9. Yes-no question- Question that can only be answered with yes or no, without further information

10. follow-up question- reply questions 

11. Objective writing- intent upon or dealing with things external to the mind rather than with thoughts or feelings, as a person or a book.

12. Transition paragraph- Paragraph that introduces a quote 

13. Hard news story- A deep story that has meaning

14. Soft news story- Less important story /light hearted 

15. Inverted Pyramid-  a visual information should be prioritized and structured in a text that journalists uses.

16. Third-person point of view- writing about someone else 

17. 5 Ws and H lead- Who, what. when, where, why. and how 

18. editing- Correcting and going back on your writing piece 

19. attribution- Giving credit to someone 

20. paraphrase- to shorten 

21. fragmentary quotation- uncompleted quote 

22. direct quotation- exact words of someone else in your writing 

23. partial quotation- incomplete quote

24. Uses of quotations - Someone else said something that you put in your story 

25. When to use quotations- when someone else said it

26. When quotations are unnecessary or not desired- When you use quote as a fact 

27. Editorial- writing that people have their opinion in 

28. editorial page- a page that people submit their opinions 

29. columns- the form an article is written in 

30. editorial that criticizes- article that criticizes a person, place or product

31. editorial that explains- article that explains something 

32. editorial that persuades- article that persuades a product
33. letter to the editor- letter to the editor or publication 

CE #3.3

1. How many percent increase of his salary paid as a bonus COULD have Mark Houser gotten according to his contract? Page A1 "Oil land overseer Houser lands..."
it could have risen 62%
2. What NON-TEXTUAL clues are evident in the political cartoon on page A7 help the viewer to understand the artists perspective? List 4
-the cartoon man's facial expression 
-his t-shirt
-the button on his suspenders
-the way he's gripping the iPad (the way his pinky is curled looks like it resembles frustration)
3. What is the so-called 'Merry Christmas Law." Page B1 "'Peanuts display sparks outcry"
the "Merry Christmas Law' is the rule of not putting quotes,pictures,etc.. that could offend a religion or culture
4. Why is Whole Foods being removed from the Nasdaq-100 index? Page B5 "Whole Foods to leave key stock index"
whole foods is being removed do to their cap decline from 22billion to 9.9 billion in the last three years, they're unable to keep up with the competition within nasdaq.
5. What is so special about Harry Potter yoga? Page D1 "Potions and Poses"
Like no other yoga class this Harry Potter Yoga includes cloaks,wands,and potions all within the yoga

LONG RESPONSE:

Recently The Texas Department of Public safety wanted APD to investigate their labs.Four of the workers at the lab were asked to leave work with the sate.The Workers that manipulated with the confidential work that goes on in the lab have drawn the Austin's local center to close. Disobeying the rules within the lab caused many salty results and testing.The Austin lab is in the works of closing for misuse of information ,and the little number of a trust worthy staff.The community will 100% be effected by the closing of the lab ,because now tests and labs won't be completed as fast as before.Austin Police should stay out of the labs because it will cause more problems to rise from the already large issue.The state of Texas should more closely control the lab due to its important role in the community.

Peer Critique

1. Who were the sources?
Karen Garcia, Samuel Garcia, and Lalo. 

2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
Karen Garcia and Samuel Garcia were on their way home when the stopped to help a car that was pulled over. A woman who was mental then jumped in their car and started yelling at them.

3. How many paragraphs is the story?
15

4. How many words is the story (you can do this in the Google Doc itself)?
825

5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
14

6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
3

7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?
“Before I could even process what happened, she was climbing onto the center consul trying to grab my keys,” Karen said

8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
in the Middle

9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
Yes

10.If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
The woman who got into the car

11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
Yes

12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
No

13. Write a headline to go with this story:p
psychotic Lady Invades Personal Boundaries 
14. Sum up your opinion of the story:
i think this story was vary interesting and well written

15. Give them a peer grade from 0-100
100

self critique

1. Who were the sources?
Frank, Sylvia, and Jana Bhuiyan
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
My dad Frank Bhuiyan's journey to america from bangladesh.How this move impacted his life and his life though out.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
23
4. How many words is the story?
809
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
8
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
2
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?“When i met my girlfriend now wife Sylvia is when i realised i would never move back to Bangladesh,”
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
middle
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
yes
10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
my dad's mom
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
 yes 
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
yes
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
'A monumental Move'
14. Sum up the opinion of the story:
it's a bit messy
15. Give yourself a self grade from 0-100
90

CE 3.2

1. Who are three of the Trump cabinet choices that critics say are unqualified to be in those positions, according to the article on page A1 "Carson chosen to lead HUD"
Steve Mnuchin, General James Mattis, Nikki Haley
2. How, specifically, have county jails in Texas reduced the number of suicides over the past year? Page B1 "Jail suicides drop..."procedures require jail intake officers to alert a supervisor, judge or a mental health professional any time newly arrived prisoners indicate they had considered killing or hurting themselves recently, had ever attempted suicide, are feeling hopeless or have nothing to look forward to,more in depth caring caring of the inmates is required.
3. What kind of business is Perk Inc.? Page B5 "Calif. firm buys..."
a business that makes mobile reward software 
4. Who are the five Heisman candidates and what school do they attend? Page C1 "Heisman Hopefuls"
Lamar Jackson-Louisville Cardinals, Jabrill Peppers-Michigan, Deshaun Watson-Clemson,Baker mayfield-OU ,Dede Westbrook-OU
5. What are two things you could do in Pt. Reyes, CA? Page SA2 "Flee San Francisco"
i would do the art work shop and wood block print holiday cards

LONG RESPONSE :

In Colorado city,Texas Iraan football team took a victorious win at they football game letting them advance to the semi final game.Though things were all extremely joyful for the high school after the big win ,it did not last long. Unfortunately,Iraan high schools cheer team was in tragic bus accident on the way home from the game. yes i enjoyed this piece because the first thing you see the you look at the piece is the positive victory of the high school.But before you know it the tragedy of the cheerleaders is stated and the story from there was grim.
The writers in this story really elaborated on the car accident allowing me to really understand what happened in and after the crash.The writers gave a public service announcement at eh beginning of the piece,something that is never done in a feature story,and was allowed because of the circumstances of the occurrence.

feature story (rough draft and final)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r_QTUDICgj4LVrzDQ1SeKYHwWYIxKnmtXvnMyliItqs/edit?usp=sharing

feature story interview question and answers (notes)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10JnNvz-ZOFjxmAFGGxG7WaHOvHnoZ2LuRthLQMdW2EM/edit?usp=sharing

CE #3.1

1. How many people were injured in the attack yesterday at Ohio State University? Page A1 "Terror suspected in college attack"
11people
2. What is the 'word of the year' and what does it mean? Page A2
xenophobia-fear or hatred of foreigners, people from different cultures or strangers.
3. What effect, according to Jonathan Saenz in the story, is the Dripping Spring school board failure to take action on transgendered issues at Walnut Spring Elementary School? Page B1 "School gender policy..."
everyone not involved in the transgender community were released ,while those who were are outraged about the lack of support.
4. Who would Elise Foradory like to have dinner with? Page C3 "Faces on the Field"
her mom dad and brother
5. What is the Marco Polo App? Page D6
its similar to a video walkie talkie where You can use filters,doodle,message,and talk.

LONG RESPONSE 
summary: President elect trump Donald Trump has announced how he would like to cancel contact with the country of Cuba. Trumps plan is to keep pushing the thought and plan of removing all normalization with Cuba that has recently been made in the last few years. However the people involved are against his plan. They believe that the new "normal" is progressive and needs to stay.


Personally i don't think its in our best interest to remove contact with cuba.If we do separate i fear possible fighting with cuba may happen that could easily be avoided if we stick with the normalization that has been formed between the two of us.Cuba seems like a beautiful interesting place ,and i would love to visit.Obama has helped cubes economy and made good ties between the U.S and Cuba.

fun in the sun

Leading up to it as a kid you think your 15th through 18th years are going to be some of your best. But when it comes down it that cliche to fulfill is up to you. Will you be optimistic or pessimistic about that standard?

    To my dismay I’ve noticed I'm extremely pessimistic about everything as a teenager. I find no joy in football games,party,pep rally,etc. I just view everything in high school as stupid and only relevant for the next month maximum.Sure, things like boys and new friends are good and keep me sane for the moment but in reality nobody I'm meeting and talking to now is relevant in the long run. 

The way i view it ,high school is just my last 4 years of education thats required by law,and after it I'm only own to find out what relevance my existence has to the world. 

I want nothing more than for this chapter of high school and teenage years to be over so i can start a new part of my life. I want my opinions and actions to actually have relevance to something broader than drama or arguments.For now my life is relying off of someone else always. Sure I'm privileged and I'm well aware of that, but i still want more of my life than what i have.Thats a bit selfish but its true. 

I envy to live my life in a city like London, new york,or LA where theres someone and something new everyday,instead of coming to the same place every day,see the same faces,hear the same voices,and go to the same classes.But its all temporary and i know that high school ,and this part of my life will end sooner than i think.

Lone star dispatch #2

Athletics-Sophomore soars elegantly on the silks

Sophomore Layla Harris does silk rope acrabatics. Layla's life on her aerial silks is shared,and her mom shares her views on her daughters interesting hobby.

Who was quoted in the story? Layla Harris, Toni Harris,Sophia Harris 

What quote was the strongest in your opinion? "Layla is dedicated to silks"

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading? Yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement? quote

News-Tech theater teacher passes away from cancer

A past teacher at bowie Mr Robert Gomez Recently passed away from cancer. Students reminisce on how he influenced them and those around.

Who was quoted in the story? Ben Wheeler,Sam Searless

What quote was the strongest in your opinion? "He Brought creativity, happiness ,sarcasm,and joy to the company."

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading? yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement? quote

Reviews-Lady Gaga Stuns fans with her new album

Lady Gaga recently released her new album Joanne, unleashing  a odd likable new style of music. Gaga took her fans to a new level of impressed with her new wave of personal different music.

Who was quoted in the story? nobody

What quote was the strongest in your opinion? theres no quotes used

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading? yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement? statement 

Entertainment-Aspiring Silver stars audition 

The Bowie Silver stars are ready to recruit again and head coaches share tips on what it takes. And the silver star routine is shared.

Who was quoted in the story?Emily Davis,Courtney Allison,Katrina Kilsby

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?"BE confident in what you dos much that if you make a mistake ,make it look like it was supposed to be that way."

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?quote

Commentary-Bathroom issue is really a non-issue

The on going trans gender bathroom issue is addressed.Transgender people should use which ever bathroom they please is the conclusion.

Who was quoted in the story?no quotes used

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?no quotes

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?statement

Feature-Skating her way to the win

Senior Nina Tinsley goes to Beijing to compete in the world championship for roller blading. She shares how the sport works and the details of the world team.

Who was quoted in the story?Nina Tinsley

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?"But i think it was worth it.My teachers made it very worth it."

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?no

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?quote

In depth- students find their talents through clubs

Students often feel out of place at school,but with all the new clubs students are able to connect with others who share the same interest. students share what clubs are like.

Who was quoted in the story?Amanda Pfeiffer,Max Wood,Hosei Nakajima,Christina Jia,Caleb Newton,Emily Robinett

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?"We get to celebrate the awesome creations of other people,and when you have your own moment of brilliance its certain to be recognized."

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?no

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?quote

1. What is your favorite photo in the entire paper?The drawing of Lady Gaga's Joanne album cover
1A. Why is this your favorite?

Because it relates to my instrest in music

2. What is your least favorite photo in the entire paper?The music notes 
2A. Why is this your least favorite?
their extremely simple and could be replaced by something more unique and interesting

3. If you were a photographer on staff, which event/photo assignment would you have liked to do for this issue? You will need to look through the entire paper and see the topics covered and decide which one you think would have been fun.
I think documenting the different clubs would be fun because you would capture people doing what they genuinlly like

4. Overall, how would you rate the photography in this issue? What were the strong points and weak points.

6 out of 10, because i thought the photos were boring,but they fit well with their storys

 Suggestions:

writing a piece on..Diana Dunn,shes a competitive swimmer who has been to the olympic trials
commentary piece on...our new president elect, 'Glory Days' by Little Mix 

feature story brainstorm

1. Who is your main subject?
my dad.
2. Supporting interviews (who else do you need to talk to, minimum 2 other people)?
my mom, and older sister.
3. What is the topic or potential topic?
my dad moving to the U.S from Bangladesh when he was 19
4. Which angle from above will you write the story?
3rd person
5. Then to help you get going faster, come up with 20 questions that you can ask your main subject. Type these in your blog.

1.how did you moving make an impact on your life?i

2.who influenced you to move?

3.do you miss Bangladesh?

4.do you regret any part of moving away?

5.who did you miss most when you moved?

6.looking back on it now what was the hardest part about moving?

7.when did you realize your life was taking off in america and you would never move back to Bangladesh?

8.What is the most rewarding thing about you move?

9.Did you think about your family before your move?

10.Was america what you expected when you arrived?

11.How have you changed since your arrival in the U.S?

12.If it wasn't for your job and family being here would you consider moving back to Bangladesh?

13.Is their anything you miss in Bangladesh/

14.How did you move effect your as a person?

15.were you scared to move here alone?

16.If you could have brought one person with you who would it have been?

17.Why did you move here?

18.What was your number one priority of moving here?

19.If you were 19 again would you still move?

20.What made the separation from your family for years worth it in the end?
21. hardships you faced?
6. Once you complete that portion, you need to come up with 5-10 questions you need to ask your supporting interviews. Type these into your blog. You may need different questions for each supporting subject.

1.What is something you admire of him?

2.Would you ever do such a drastic move to foreign country ?

3.Do you find his actions of moving for the reasons he did admirable?

4.How does his journey impact your life?

5.What does his journey teach you?

7. You will need to do a little research on the topic you expect to interview your main subject about. Take a little time and do some google searching - find at least 5 new things about the intended topic you should know before you interview your main subject. List those on your blog.

What was america like when you arrived?

how was bangladesh in 1984(when you left) like in comparison to what it is now?
how is america now in comparison to what it was when you first came?

8. Write when you plan to conduct the interview(s)?

over thanksgiving break

9. Where you will interview them (some interviews are better to do in the persons environment, while others should be done in public places, ALL interviews should be done in person)?

At my house during thanksgiving break so i can also talk to my sister.

10. How will you record the information? (taking notes is ideal, and if you want to record the conversation you MUST get permission. You can do both if they will allow you to record, this is a really strong technique that you could use.)

i will write notes

CE #2.4

1. What is causing earthquakes in Oklahoma, according to the story on page A3 "Oklahoma earthquake damages 40-50 buildings"
the earthquakes are caused from the injection of wastewater left over from oil and gas production.
2. Why are open-record laws so important? Page B1 "Greyhound data now...."
to provide a frame work for forcing dawdling or obstructionist agencies
3. What was so interesting about a judge and her friend rescuing two boys from a fire? Page B1 "Bastrop judge...."
the fact that a group women were able to save grown men and children's lives.
4. What is Lance Armstrong's objective with his new podcast "The Forward." Page C1 "With podcast Armstrong..." DO NOT WRITE "to recycle his image" be more specific.
Lance wants to prove that he's moving in a new direction in his life,and trying to prove he's more than a lying cheater.
5. What movie do you want to see? Page D2 "Doctor Strange conquers...."
i would like to see 'Trolls'.

LONG RESPONSE :

I believe Hillary Clinton will want the election tonight. By her being the first being the first female  president the united states has ever had,i believe that that will broaden the minds of african citizens nation wide,if she pulls though on her ideas she has been campaigning for.And as for me and the rest of Americas youth ,Hillary being president could benefit us for college tuition and tax cuts for when our time comes.If the poles are close i think the courts should be involved ,because gonervement is obviously their area of expertise and they would know what would be right for america,but i don't think that will happen and it will be called directly of what the poles say,not really having an effect on the decision making process.The election should be based of the popular vote because is better shows what america wants.No i think it will always be republican vs democrat in the presidential election.Yes I'm worried because these election effect the youth of americas future ,and if not taken seriously it can make a greater effect than we think.Yes i will watch the election process because i find it exciting to watch it while everyone else is.

The Man Who Played The Violin

Do we perceive beauty? in our own ways. People have their own views about beauty and they perceive it.And that is what makes 'beauty' beautiful,it is based of off your opinion,and your thoughts ,making it personal to you.
Do we stop to appreciate it? yes,if its what appeases to us.With our selfish minds we only appreciate the brilliant ,but bash on everything in between.
Do we recognize the talent in an unexpected context? no because we're to caught up in our minds selfish outlooks.

Feature Writing Preview

1. What is the difference between a hard news lead (lede) and the one you read above?
in a news lede the 5 w's and H are all included within 1-2 sentences at the beginning of the article,while this passage has them through out the entire piece.


2. What paragraph(s) did you learn the following information?
a. Who- 2nd paragraph
b. What- 2nd paragraph 
c. Where- 2nd paragraph
d. When- 2nd paragraph and 3rd paragraph
e. Why- 3rd paragraph
f. How- 5th paragraph

3. Are there quotes in this story?
Yes.

4. Are those quotes arranged in the "quote-transiton" style we used in news writing?majority are.

5. Who is quoted in the story?
Kevin McLoughlin and his boss,Doral Chenoweth III,Ken Andrews,Tony Florentino,Frank Wilson,Patrick Harris,&Ted Williams are quoted.

6. What quote is the most powerful in the story, in your opinion?
"I'm trying hard to get it back," Williams says.

 7. How many paragraphs is the story?
33 paragraphs

8. How many words is the story (hint: you can copy and paste into Word and get a word count)?
765 words

9. What is significant about the lead (lede) and the final paragraph of the story?
They make the story intruiging to keep reading reading


10. Why do you think the writer did that with the lead (lede) and final paragraph?
To add effect to the story and story teller.

11. Was the story interesting to read?
yes.

12. When you finished the story, but BEFORE you watched the video, did you want to hear the voice?
Yes. 

13. Multimedia approaches are powerful tools, what impact did the video have when watched directly after reading the story?
It made the story easier to comprehend

14. Would the story have lost its impact without the video?
No.

15. Did the writer try to come up with a way for you to hear the voice, i.e. did he try to describe the voice or give you a way to "hear" the voice without really hearing it?
Yes.

16. How did the writer do that?
he used good imagery.

Opinion piece #2

https://docs.google.com/document/d/170vvE29k8o0d4c7kkpJZ_2NUucjOCurPMSct-X84MyI/edit?usp=sharing

Editorials and personal columns

editorial ideas
-social media
-friday A/B day scheduling
-removal of final incentive

A columnist i follow is a pair of two best friends Eleanor Calder & Max Hurd,
who run a blog called 'trend pear'.I read there blog because they write and post pictures of things i find interesting.That being fashion,travel,and new trends happening. I keep returning to them because i find there travels and fashion posts entertaing.

Peer Evaluations 2

evaluation #1
1. Who wrote the story?

Addisyn Hibdon

2. What is their story about?

 her opinion on dress codes

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

she doesnt like them. 

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

Yes. 

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

No, they stuck to it.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

No.

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st.


Evaluation #2

1. Who wrote the story?

Morgan sanders

2. What is their story about?

Bowie's intense school dress code

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"I think dress code at Bowie should be loosened a little. "

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

yes.

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

no.she was very presistant on the fact that Bowies dress code is to harsh.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

yes

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st

CE #2.3

1. Why is Austin police chief Art Acevedo threatening to fire certain police supervisors? Page A1 "Acevedo: report complaints or else."
Because they failed to inform him about fellow officers unjust actions
2. Why are some individuals who are being required to buy federally mandated health insurance choosing to pay a fine instead of pay for the insurance? Page A1 "Many pick penalty over premium."
Because it ends up being cheaper than buying the insurance.
3.How could a future Bowie student earn a "micromajor?" Page B1 "UT, Austin schools join..."
UT is reaching out to texas schools to give students a chance to earn college credits
4. Who won the Formula 1 race at COTA last weekend and who was the headline performer at the concert that night? Page C1 "Victory lap for COTA."
Taylor Swift was the head liner, and Lewis Hamilton won
5. Which of The Long Weekend five things to do would you like to go to if you could this weekend? Page D2 "The Long Weekend."
I would go to the viva la vida festival and parade



LONG RESPONSE :

Texas has always been a republican ,and this election has been close due to the candidates of each part,but even under these circumstances i don't believe texas has turned purple because even though a lot of its citizens have switched to democrat for this election,there are still to many stubborn republicans who refuse to make the switch just because they want to carry on tradition.The Green party lead by Jill Stein was not included mostly likely because of her extremist ideas like removing wifi from schools.I think the shift to blue is primarily happening because Texas is realizing that the republican candidate this election Donald Trump, is not fit for the job of the president of the united states. The Texas likely voters were polled about the candidates of the two candidates running for the united states.The poles are always counted in different ways or percentages ,most likely making this one not very accurate.A big thing people polled on was the presidential election, and the libertarian party. Yes these are very important,especially the pole on the election because its for such a serious matter like the leader of the united states.

Opinion writing preview

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wzu2IUjYeEXT7Gguha3CFOlrov4Axtx45llqz-JiFk4/edit?usp=sharing

CE #2.2

1.Why is the city of Austin considering how it's DNA lab works and handles its cases? Page A1 "Officials: Separate crimes labs, polics."
So the labs and the police department can be separate from each both.
2. What is the "stance" or opinion of the writer in the story "Texas convicts sentenced to death...." on page A9
"Texas has failed to ensure that death row receive adequate appellate in death penalty cases."
3. What is 1 of the 3 problems with transgendered legislation in the Texas courts, according to the story on page B1 "Judge clarifies transgendered...."
Whether any part of the federal transgender guide lines can be reinstated if offending passages are removed.
4. Why was T-Mobile fined $48M? Page B5 "T-Mobile fined..."
because there "unlimited" plans were not really unlimited 
5. Who do Kirk Bohls and Cedric Golden think should start for the Dallas Cowboys at QB for the rest of the season? Page C1 "Quarterback Conundrum"
Prescott

Long response:
In last nights debate the topics of abortion and gun control were brought up,and these two topics lead back to the supreme court.
With the two topics of abortion and gun control, i strongly side with clinton.
Abortion is something that i believe is pro choice, and should be completely up to the women baring the child if she is to abort it or not. We as bystanders do not know her story and she does not have to tell us or justify her decision  if she doesn't wish too.
And Gun Control is an action i believe should be enforced. The united states has had so many shooting recently involving hand gun, and machine guns,a problem that could be solved if gun laws were stricter. These topics are extremely important in this years election, because our candidates are extremely different on there views of abortion and gun control. And voters this year should educate themselves on the these topics, as well as our two candidates.

Opinion Writing Preview

Inequalities evident in campus sports

1. Who wrote the story?

not stated

2. What is their story about?

Girls not having the same equality to remove there shirts in running to cool down their bodies as boys do without judgement. 

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"Girls should be able to remove their shirts and just wear their sports bra to cool down"

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

no

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

no they were not wishy washy at all.Through the entire article the writer showed prominently she was pro equality for girls.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

no.

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

3rd person

Changes in the iPhone 7

1. Who wrote the story?

Harrison Louis

2. What is their story about?

The new changes in Apple's new iPhone 7, and opinions on the 'improvements'

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"I believe the updates to the new iPhone 7 are fantastic"

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

no

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

yes.Multiple times in the article Harrison Louis talks about mishaps with apple but then recovers them with a slight positive.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

no

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st person

Stricter finals incentive 

1. Who wrote the story?

Douglas Smith

2. What is their story about?

The affect the new final incentive is having on both Douglas Smith, and the rest of the student body.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"I share the opinion of many other students on the matter which is a combination of resignation and discontent."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

no

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

No,the writer was very straight forward with his frustration of the new final incentive changes that occurred this year.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

no

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st person

Changes to the schedule cause issues both in school and after school

1. Who wrote the story?

Ian Miller

2. What is their story about?

How the new JBHS school schedule is effecting students.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"i think these new changes made to the schedule are extremely unnecessary and unfair."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

no

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

no, the writer was consistent about his negative view on the changes in school scheduling. 

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

no

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st person

Epipen costs raises concerns over financial problems

1. Who wrote the story?

Maria Demopoulos

2. What is their story about?

The effect in the rise on the price of epipens.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.

"I feel like these should be less than $50 and that the company producing these are just being greedy and selfish."

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?

no

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.

no,Maria was clear about her opinion of the rise in epipen prices in unnecessary.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?

no

7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?

1st person

A. What do you think the major differences between a hard news story and an opinions piece? Come up with at least three.

-quotes aren't needed in opinion pieces ,unlike news stories.

-opinion pieces allow for broader writing and thinking

-News stories tend to be more straight forward with writing styles

B. Why do you think there aren't very many photos on this page?

because the words used are more descriptive in this form of writing.

C. What are three topics you think would be good to write an opinions piece on?

-Donald Trumps locker room talk

-One Directions Hiatus

-Hillary Clintons email scandal