self critique

1. Who were the sources?
Frank, Sylvia, and Jana Bhuiyan
2. Summarize in 1-3 sentences the story:
My dad Frank Bhuiyan's journey to america from bangladesh.How this move impacted his life and his life though out.
3. How many paragraphs is the story?
23
4. How many words is the story?
809
5. How many direct quotes are there in the story?
8
6. How many different people are quoted in the story?
2
7. Which quote is the most impactful of all the ones included?“When i met my girlfriend now wife Sylvia is when i realised i would never move back to Bangladesh,”
8. Where is that quote located in the story (beginning, middle, end)?
middle
9. Does the lede effectively capture the readers attention?
yes
10. If their could have been one additional person interviewed for the story, who would it be?
my dad's mom
11. Is the story objective, which means are all non-direct quotes statements of fact and NOT the opinion of the writer?
 yes 
12. Are there any unanswered questions that you have after reading the article?
yes
13. Write a headline to go with this story:
'A monumental Move'
14. Sum up the opinion of the story:
it's a bit messy
15. Give yourself a self grade from 0-100
90